• 17 November 2013
    • Информатика
    • Автор: вика1690

    Делаю домашние задание по английскому.
    Альтернативная история Джейн Эйр.
    Укажите пожалуйста на речевые и грамматические ошибки в тексте
    Jane was only 14 years old when her parents died under tragic circumstances.
    Except for aunt and cousins John,Eliza and Georgina she was no one else/ Of course,the favourite aunt was invited Jane to live in her house.
    Aunt lived in a beautiful country house. From windows had lovely view of clean and fresh pine forest. It was paradisiacal place. The house was spacious. Aroun were luxurious furniture items. Finally,Jane has got own a luxurious room.
    In the house all was perfect except Jane. Jane was a very simple girl. She was wearing old jeans and t-shirts with funny prints.She was like the black sheep in his fabulous house.
    It is very different from all the inhabitants of the house .Her cousins ​​were beautiful , expensive clothes .No one thought to blame the little girl that she is a poor and do not have to live in such a rich house .No one, except John .He really hated Jane and humiliated in every possible way .Day by day the girl endured taunts , insults and rudeness of this horrible man. Once he hit Jane so much that out of her head ran a trickle of blood.
    Jane was very tired from a horrible life in a beautiful house and fled .Outside the house she had very difficult. She had to wash the dishes in cheap cafes and wash the floors in the clinics. But after going through all the difficulties that are associated with a lack of money and lack of shelter , she finally found her happy and big love


    Примитивно,но я буду очень благодарна за корректировку сего текста


    • 17 November 2013
    • Ответ оставил: Kozhemyakolena

    Jane was only 14 years old when her parents died in tragic circumstances .With the exception of aunts and cousins, brothers John , Eliza and Georgiana she had no one else / Of course , the beloved Aunt Jane was invited to live in her house.My aunt lived in a beautiful country house. From the windows had a lovely clean and fresh pine forest. It was paradise . The house was spacious . She had luxurious furniture items. Finally , Jane received its own luxurious room .Everything in the house was fine , except for Jane. Jane was a very simple girl . She was wearing old jeans and t-shirts with zabavnymirisunkami . It was like a black sheep in her fabulous home .This is not very different from all the inhabitants of the house . Her cousins ​​were interesting, in expensive clothes. No one thought to blame the little girl that she is poor and do not have to live in a rich house . No one, except John. He really hated Jane and humiliated in all possible ways . every day she endured taunts , insults and rudeness of this horrible man. Once he hit Jane so much that out of her head pobezhalastruyka blood.Jane was very tired from a horrible life in a beautiful house , and fled. Outside the house it was very difficult. She had to wash the dishes in cheap cafes and wash the floors in hospitals. But after going through all the difficulties that are associated sotsutstviem of money and lack of shelter , she finally found her happy and great love

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